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The snow falls in methodical passion
Upon city streets and crowded rooftops,
Country cottages and harvested crops,
Blotting out cars and freezing out friction,
Bringing many angels to creation.
Throughout time, it goes on in this fashion.

With heavenly, existential beauty,
The snow is our hearts greatest catalyst,
To burn away its shell and melt the mist;
We gather about our old hearts warm hearth,
Frost freezing memories into the earth.
Love grows like a rose in snow packed tightly.

With one snow, one ephemeral moment,
The impossible happens, life changes.
But stays to weather many more phases.
People we once knew as common strangers
Grow like the rose into brothers, lovers,
Never fading away, always fervent.

Common love may grow in embers that glow;
True love will come as a rose in the snow.
©2007-2009 ~aaronvegeguy
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I wrote this after the first snow while I was in Colorado. I hope you enjoy it!
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:O this is beautiful! well written ^ ^

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Every day is a day of silence. What will you do to end the silence?
Lovely imagery and an eloquent use of symbolism that fits quite nicely with the rhyme I dare say :)

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"Imagination is more important than knowledge" -Albert Einstein
~THE FBI ALWAYS BE AFTER ME LUCKY CHARMS~
i like the last 2 lines

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"it seems to me most strange that men should fear, seeing that death, a necessary end, will come when it will come."
I love it soo much, its beautiful, speically the last 2 sentances :heart:

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:bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow:: We may run, walk, stumble, drive, or fly, but let us never lost sight of the reason for the journey, or miss a chance to see a rainbow on the way. :bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple:
ha, thanks for the appreciation.

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Never Trust A Heart That Is So Bent It Can't Break
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np!

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:bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow:: We may run, walk, stumble, drive, or fly, but let us never lost sight of the reason for the journey, or miss a chance to see a rainbow on the way. :bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple:

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